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I looked up synonyms for the word LOVER in a thesaurus online. I took the first list and chose the words I was going to use in a Monty Python type of gag using multiple words to address a female friend using every word to address her. (All except the word honey which I added for no particular reason. Most likely not even a synonym ) Instead I was inspired to write this silly love poem. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it(barely if at all) Every word with a capital letter at the beginning was part of the list. Good Luck!

Companion? not yet Girlfriend? no (nondescript and tired) Sweetheart? the heart is deeper than that it’s not coated in Honey the word doesn’t do you justice Beloved? ah to be loved a misconstrued formation -yes the creation of words is vital Darling hold me in your grasp in the Dearest of all embraces a touch enlightens like a Flame red my Inamorata my Paramour you keep me Steady you my Suppliant of pure intentions i Swain in your presence you the Recipient of my eternal bliss my one and only Truelove you -my Valentine

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Date: 3/5/2020 3:22:00 PM
Great poem, Armand. Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/23/2020 8:19:00 AM
So cute! Enjoyable!
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Date: 2/22/2020 6:45:00 PM
Precious, Armand. Good seeing you back .
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Date: 2/22/2020 5:49:00 PM
Hello Marice Yvonne, this type of a poem was done cleverly. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/22/2020 12:36:00 PM
The beat of my heart stills as your golden tongue tempts to tease my senses. You weave a tapestry of touch such as a faded rose coming back to life. Beautiful and a fav Armand
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Date: 2/22/2020 10:37:00 AM
Who could say no that, Armand:) Ingenious write! I'm with Paul, nice to see you posting again:)
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Date: 2/22/2020 7:35:00 AM
I'm pleased to see you posting again, Armand. An enjoyable romantic poem...definitely not silly:) Regards // paul
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