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Canvas In a Blaze

hands dip on easel

        blazing hues like moon's textures

                ...while figures unfold




Brian Strand's Contest 222

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2014 8:54:00 PM

lovely Nette, , Congratulations!! Luv ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2014 11:38:00 AM

superb Nette congrats on win hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2014 10:20:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2014 4:17:00 AM

Lovely imagery penned and congrats on the win, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2014 10:22:00 PM

Congrats on the winners list, Nette. Yours was a beauty.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/20/2014 7:38:00 PM

Fabulous image Nette. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kash Poet

Date: 1/24/2014 2:28:00 PM

Great imagery in this senryu!Enjoyed.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/22/2014 8:02:00 PM

some artest have that touch just like some poets have that touch.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/22/2014 5:48:00 PM

My Dear Nette, The depth burns! 7 Decalescere Luv, chuck

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/22/2014 5:11:00 PM

I see this as being so sensual... like the infamous scene from ghost, the hands and the clay. So lovely. ;) I wrote you a sonnet today, Soul-Sis... xoxox

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/22/2014 3:45:00 PM

I like the way you you put this together. It reminds me of a painting that my cousin did a long time ago. The rebirth of Venus. She was coming out of the sea and the rays of the sun were heating the water. It looked like fire. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Mohammad Abedin

Date: 1/22/2014 11:57:00 AM

Very nice

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/22/2014 11:41:00 AM

Very deeply worded. Thought provoking for me. Loved always, my friend, bl

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/22/2014 11:10:00 AM

Very nice.

Daver Austin

Date: 1/22/2014 9:22:00 AM

Attention J. Pollack. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/22/2014 7:01:00 AM

done ;)

Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/22/2014 7:51:00 AM

yuppp!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2014 6:55:00 PM

A gorgeous senryu, Nette. hmmm, is this for Susan's contest?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2014 6:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative Senryu..I can see an artist painting..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2014 3:55:00 PM

no matter it is so beautiful <3 Love ~SKAT~

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 1/21/2014 12:39:00 PM

You color me happy with your moving brush. OUTSTANDING!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 1/21/2014 9:30:00 AM

beautifully carved:)

Ashley Conte

Date: 1/21/2014 8:29:00 AM

You give life and depth to an image. Wow, a splash of colorful senryu!

Banjo Casto

Date: 1/21/2014 8:10:00 AM

Remarkable imagery! I felt the pull of the paint, the undeniable need to take form on canvas. " While figures unfold" capture the aspect of art!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2014 8:09:00 AM

- Beautifully written. (are you sick .... got the flu?? .... seems I read that somewhere ... hope you are better today.) - Have a great day, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2014 7:46:00 AM

"...While figures unfold" Wow, what a tremendous juxtaposition, incredible Nette! I surely loved reading this astounding poem this morning my friend! What a dynamic piece, quite the stupendous poem, Great Work!!

Canvas In a Blaze

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