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Canvas In a Blaze

hands dip on easel

        blazing hues like moon's textures

                ...while figures unfold




Brian Strand's Contest 222

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Skat A

February 26, 2014 at 8:54 PM

lovely Nette, , Congratulations!! Luv ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton

February 21, 2014 at 11:38 AM

superb Nette congrats on win hugs

Sara Kendrick

February 21, 2014 at 10:20 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 21, 2014 at 4:17 AM

Lovely imagery penned and congrats on the win, nette

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2014 at 10:22 PM

Congrats on the winners list, Nette. Yours was a beauty.

Connie Gildersleeve

February 20, 2014 at 7:38 PM

Fabulous image Nette. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kash Poet

January 24, 2014 at 2:28 PM

Great imagery in this senryu!Enjoyed.

John Loving Iii

January 22, 2014 at 8:02 PM

some artest have that touch just like some poets have that touch.

Chuck Melugin

January 22, 2014 at 5:48 PM

My Dear Nette, The depth burns! 7 Decalescere Luv, chuck

Cyndi Macmillan

January 22, 2014 at 5:11 PM

I see this as being so sensual... like the infamous scene from ghost, the hands and the clay. So lovely. ;) I wrote you a sonnet today, Soul-Sis... xoxox

Lucilla Carrillo

January 22, 2014 at 3:45 PM

I like the way you you put this together. It reminds me of a painting that my cousin did a long time ago. The rebirth of Venus. She was coming out of the sea and the rays of the sun were heating the water. It looked like fire. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Mohammad Abedin

January 22, 2014 at 11:57 AM

Very nice

Bl Devnath

January 22, 2014 at 11:41 AM

Very deeply worded. Thought provoking for me. Loved always, my friend, bl

Jon A Cavanaugh

January 22, 2014 at 11:10 AM

Very nice.

Daver Austin

January 22, 2014 at 9:22 AM

Attention J. Pollack. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi

January 22, 2014 at 7:01 AM

done ;)

Nette Onclaud

January 22, 2014 at 7:51 AM

yuppp!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2014 at 6:55 PM

A gorgeous senryu, Nette. hmmm, is this for Susan's contest?

Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2014 at 6:39 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative Senryu..I can see an artist painting..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Skat A

January 21, 2014 at 3:55 PM

no matter it is so beautiful <3 Love ~SKAT~

Jajosh Ongado

January 21, 2014 at 12:39 PM

You color me happy with your moving brush. OUTSTANDING!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

January 21, 2014 at 9:30 AM

beautifully carved:)

Ashley Conte

January 21, 2014 at 8:29 AM

You give life and depth to an image. Wow, a splash of colorful senryu!

Banjo Casto

January 21, 2014 at 8:10 AM

Remarkable imagery! I felt the pull of the paint, the undeniable need to take form on canvas. " While figures unfold" capture the aspect of art!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 21, 2014 at 8:09 AM

- Beautifully written. (are you sick .... got the flu?? .... seems I read that somewhere ... hope you are better today.) - Have a great day, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

January 21, 2014 at 7:46 AM

"...While figures unfold" Wow, what a tremendous juxtaposition, incredible Nette! I surely loved reading this astounding poem this morning my friend! What a dynamic piece, quite the stupendous poem, Great Work!!

Canvas In a Blaze

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