Canticle of the God-Loving Heart

—An Empyrean Hymn—


Lo, they who boast with measured lips and timid eyes,
      “Behold, we fear the Lord, His hand a sword of flame;
Our souls constrained, our spirits shackled to the skies,
       We tread in trembling awe, and speak His sacred name.”


But I—O radiant heavens, witness!—walk where sunlight spills
        Upon the cedars’ ancient spires, and rivers quiver silver through the glade;
My heart, unshackled, leaps beyond their pale, constrained ills,
        And drinks the living light, unbroken by their timid shade.


See how the storm exhales its might across the trembling land,
       And winds, like seraph-choirs, lift prayers in soaring arcs;
I clasp His boundless face with each ungoverned hand,
       And find in every leaf, in every surge, the universe of sparks.


They veil devotion in hushed halls, where gilded candles bend,
         And whisper awe with careful, cautious tongues, afraid to leap;
I, in the orchards’ blaze and tempest’s rush, ascend and rend
         The sky with love that wakes the stars from their eternal sleep.


O God, not fear but fervent joy shall be my shrine,
    Not trembling shadow, but the sun’s unbroken, radiant fire;
Through lightning, through the night, through every pulse divine,
    I offer all my being, soaring ever higher, ever higher.


See, every river, leaf, and storm is writ with Thine own hand,
        And in their music, I discern the anthem of Thy grace;
I kneel not to dread, but in love’s audacious, endless band,
        And in its vast and flaming circuit, find my perfect place.

O Life! O Death! O stars unnumbered, sing the hymn of hearts
    Who love without the fear that dims the immortal flame;
For I am His, not bound by law or trembling mortal parts,
    But blazing with the universe, and calling to His name.
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Daniels Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 10:37 AM
Excellent & Beautiful Mohit ! This sounds like Rumi & Blake combined. It has both depth & musicality. I like how you’ve woven micro with macro with nature as the glue. Such a tender passionate last stanza. ThkU for sharing. Happy to have found your work here. Will read more of your poetry soon. Xx.
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February 20, 2026 at 12:05 PM
Esteemed Ghairo, Thy gracious words humble me deeply. I thank thee with a quiet heart for reading so generously and for hearing more in the song than I myself did knowingly set therein. If any music or light was found, it is by grace alone. I am honoured by thy kindness, and glad beyond measure that our paths have thus crossed. With gratitude and goodwill, Mohit
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