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Cant You See

I see you, but do you see me? Do you see what we can be? We could be together forever, keeping our love as low as a treasure... I can see you very clear... These feelings are kicking me in the rear... I want to ask you a question... But can you hear me? Can you see me? I’m too afraid to go up to you... I fear that you have more important things to do... I see you passing by, You took my hand as if it was planned... We walked together, When I’m with you, I feel like my heart is lighter than a feather... But then, our hands came apart, but you took my heart... and you did your part... I saw you and my heart flew... And you saw me, finally... I know that this is true because i am with you... And i love you...

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Date: 11/15/2010 7:17:00 PM
a sweet and loving write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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