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Cant Wait To Meet Her

Shes one in a million with a chance shes mine.
She took my heart but mostly time.
Shes a hint of beautiful with a heart of gold.
It could be love although Im told.
But most of all she is the one.
My sky, my moon and my sun. 
she fills the holes and cures my pain.
her love so good it curses my vains.
Shes everything and my world.
I cant wait to meet this girl...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/5/2016 5:32:00 PM
well done. SKAT
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Date: 2/7/2010 6:17:00 PM
Welcome Ryan. She out there somewhere, never fear. :) take good care of her when you do find her. good work...Margaret
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Date: 2/7/2010 8:41:00 AM
Go get her ... for she like a flower cannot stand too long in the sun of such praise without blooming for you. Welcome to poetry soup, it is a world of friends and poets, but it also a human world where we find support for human feelings ... I pray I may count on you for such a friendship. Great write.
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:25:00 PM
Loved it!
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ryan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:54:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight.. charming... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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