Can't Be Duplicated

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Your heart is in limbo mere steps from paradise on the fringes of hell. And in this place of hurt wishes and needs collide on the pathways of fate. Happiness is a ghost; whose reality haunts your imagination. Truth, though shackled to trust; is inseparably linked to feelings of hope. Love's unbelievable; feeling like free-falling, without fear of crashing. And it's so unique it can't be duplicated; only imitated.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2018 7:38:00 PM

Lovely, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/19/2016 1:41:00 AM

You do capture the spontaneity of love ... never planned ... sometimes messy ... it just is what it is. I enjoyed your contrasting opening, "Mere steps from paradise on the fringes of hell". Keep 'em coming, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/19/2016 6:52:00 AM

Thanks Timothy, I look forward to you insightful comments. Emile.

Carol B.

Date: 2/13/2016 5:27:00 PM

Yes the feeling of love can't be duplicated. I know the feeling of free falling. Great write!

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2016 8:38:00 AM

Thanks Carol, I appreciate your support. Emile.