Canoe View

high mountains 
tips armored in white 
grass below
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Roper Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:37 AM
Great example my friend
Dutta Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 12:45 AM
Nice to follow. Sure to try your Contest. Have Good Days
Steele Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 10:49 PM
I love this mini-ku - you can create vivid imagery with well-chosen words.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:31 PM
awesome & great example, thanks
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 10:52 AM
Awesome example of what you want to see in your contest. Great title too
M  Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:00 AM
I like this Charlie….beauty seen while in a canoe! Debx
Swan Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 5:41 AM
love the title! Sounds like a beautiful day from the top to the panorama. J :)
Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 3:51 AM
Whole scene depicted beautifully in these short lines......
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