Fred Lariviere Poet Rhyme

Cannibalism - Re-Edited

Raped and left for dead
Tears still running down her eyeless head
Screaming her heart out,
Which's been removed and stacked into my mouth
I can still see your skin peel
Orgasming on the fact your wounds won’t heal
I only need my grinding teeth to make you paste
Shut the hell up and let me eat you in haste

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Lei Strauss January 7, 2015 at 4:30 AM Deliciously scary as I'm trying to picture this one out! Nice write!

Louis Nathaniel December 20, 2014 at 11:43 PM Hi Fred, I like what you added a lot! The "Orgasming" line is a great addition! Is there typo in the last line though? It's more vivid now and while its an absolutely disgusting topic matter, its definitely not an absolutely disgusting poem! Happy holidays to you and your family!!