Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Candy Horse Vs Dark Kid

The center of a star reflects just like a diamond...
Returning a pearl within each silver breath that one treasures...
With faceted panels, I promised I'd never...
Sweep over a deep sea of blue waves unmeasured...

There is a pattern woven inside golden petals that kiss the inside of my heart...
Parts of my heart that I've thus' failed to start...
With soft fingers dancing, you're forever entrancing...
My star that's eternally far...


A co write written by Liam and Christian

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Anna Hopper March 23, 2015 at 8:29 AM I ADORE this! Once again, your choice of words is beautiful! 7 for sure!

Karl Mcdonnell February 17, 2015 at 9:03 PM Liked this Liam,thanks

Alesia Leach February 14, 2015 at 4:05 PM Stunning collaboration with beautifully painted emotions. ;0)

Monterey Sirak February 9, 2015 at 7:20 AM A wonderful collaboration! So many amazing images and emotions here.

Ravi Sathasivam February 7, 2015 at 10:28 AM Excellent. Lovely imagery poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 8:52 AM You have both done a masterful job!

Tim Smith February 7, 2015 at 6:05 AM A beautiful collab....Tim

Joseph May February 6, 2015 at 10:23 PM Very good cowrite Liam....awesome last line...best wishes

Dorian Petersen Potter February 6, 2015 at 7:54 PM Hi Liam n' Christian! Very beautiful pen you've penned here my dearest friend. Fantastic imagery and collaboration! Truly amazing! A very huge 7 +++ from me to you! Your pen is truly glowing golden!Have a very wonderful weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 3:54 PM A stunning collaboration - such wonderful imagery - congrats to both of you:-) Hugs Jan a 7 from me:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2015 at 2:52 PM - A charming and beautiful poem Liam and Christian - (Who is Christian? :) - Hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2015 at 2:39 PM That far away star is intriguing ..Enjoyed reading your work... Thanks for stopping by. Sara