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Candy Cotton Sky. . Snow white wisps of cotton candy Patches of vivid blue peeking through The yarning sun awoken by joyful pleasant bird song As a gentle warming breeze Stirs the pretty flowers Kissed by moisten droplets of clinging dew . The May thorn displays wedding gown Scattered confetti proliferates the ground Tendril blooms open their hearts Releasing they’re fragrant perfume Wafting through bejewelled meadow And varied thicket After the sun has pushed away The sleepy moon . Dappled mottled paper winged ladies Dance a colour flashing Delicate ballet As the perky blackbird forages And field mice venture from they’re cosy nest In field and hay . The expanding day breathes afresh The lush evergreen abounds as gems From creations open treasure chest. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Date: 1/19/2021 7:33:00 AM
OKAY, the title alone got me excited to come and read it, and then i read the whole poem, and its imagery is absolutely beautiful... :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/19/2021 12:13:00 PM
thank you my friend beautiful just like you.glad you enjoyed. take care.Pete. x
Date: 1/19/2021 7:06:00 AM
WoW! Peter, This is just breathtaking! Your imagery is so vivid. I'm glad I viewed it; this fine morning. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/19/2021 12:16:00 PM
Hu alexis so good to hear from you. i was getting worried and was going to message you .hope you are ok my dear friend. thank you. stay safe. Pete.
Date: 1/18/2021 11:12:00 PM
A lovely nature poem. Very enticing. ~~
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/19/2021 12:18:00 PM
Thank you sir much appreciated. Hope you are keeping ok my friend. Glad you liked. Take care. Pete.
Date: 1/18/2021 4:40:00 PM
Hello Peter, oh-wow! This such a wonderful poem. I love the clouds Peter. I watch the clouds often. X Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/19/2021 3:19:00 PM
Hello Peter, I am well thank you. and i hope you are to. Did you have a good day ? Yes the clouds are inspiring. You are welcome . take Care. Best Wishes. Darlene X
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/19/2021 12:22:00 PM
Hi Darlene. always a pleasure. hope you are keeping well. i love clouds too, They're so inspiring. Thank you take good care. Best washes. Pete. X
Date: 1/18/2021 1:16:00 PM
beautiful..:) x
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/18/2021 2:38:00 PM
I know I am. I'm sexy and i know it you know it too.. Hey tyger Mwwww XXXX
Date: 1/18/2021 12:43:00 PM
- ... a lovely poem, Peter ... my clouds are full of snow not candy cotton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/18/2021 2:40:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend hope you get some good weather soon in your beautiful country. take care Pete. X
Date: 1/18/2021 12:18:00 PM
what wonderful imagery peter a joy to read on a cold blustery night... no sig of cotton candy sky for us for a few days :-) hugs jan xx
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Peter Dome
Date: 1/18/2021 2:43:00 PM
Bless you dear friend. Hope you are ok over there.Cold here but no wind. thank you sis take care. Pete X.P.s. when they discover an isle of woman, let me know X

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