Candy and Flowers

I bring her candy and flowers.
I wish this date with her goes well.
My shoes are shined and two showers
make this dude reek of sud's great smell.
Old car is bright with wax like glow.
We will have dinner and see show.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Very cute poem seasoned with humor! Hope date went well Alfred!~Che :)
Berggren Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Thanks Cheryl for reading my poem. The date went very well.
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