Candles Lit Afire

There were candles lit afire overlooking New York City
Placed there by the mournful, with heart’s so full of pity
In the park that had a view of a horizon oh so pretty
On the night of 9/11, following a day that really hit me
In memory of those lives, whose candles burned out quickly
We stood there searching for two towers that we can’t see



by Joe Flach for Russell Sivey's "By Candlelight" contest.

In memory of those firends I lost on that day.

An ad-hoc memorial of candles, pictures and letters was created at Eagle Rock Reservation in West Orange, NJ on 9/11 and the days that followed, where people gathered, cried and prayed at an overlook on First Mountain with a spectacular view of NYC.  Years later, this park was made into a formal memorial for those souls lost on 9/11.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/12/2012 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Joe. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:41:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to those who had their flames snuffed out too soon. Congrats on your win, Joe! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/10/2012 11:23:00 AM
A touching approach to the contest theme.Loved it.Congrats Joe on your win.
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:14:00 AM
very touching write here....lots of emotions coming out in your work.........congrats .........~sashi
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:58:00 PM
Congrats, Joe. Excellent memorable piece. Outstanding. Great job. Have a great weekend and Spring Ahead. Ralph
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:30:00 PM
congrats Joe on an exciting win for this memorable entry so well penned luv..
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:06:00 AM
We stood there searching for two towers that we can't see.. The world was with you and still is in this memorial dedication dear friend... We really need those candles at such times .. they definitely remind us of innocent people ... who lost their life.. Let there be light.. Charma
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Date: 3/3/2012 11:36:00 PM
An outstanding entry for this contest and heartfelt tribute to those who lost their lives...very touching. It's hard to believe it has been more than ten years since that tragic day. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/3/2012 11:33:00 PM
I see you found the poem (I had just written you a note in soupmail). Wow, this is SOME poem, Joe. you really went outside the box by doing one on 9/11. This is the kind of a poem I want to see! It just has to do well in that contest. And now I am out of here!!!
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