Candlelight Monorhyme

Candlelight monorhyme By candlelight I said gooday, The little shiela came my way, Stood me up, she didn’t play, Buggered off with Joey Jay, Darkside dinna want em hey, Rejecting poncing pals I say, Catch another girl I may, Cos I’m just ol Johnson, grey. Don Russell Sivey Contest Name By CandleLight |
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Don. Love,Carol
Merryman Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Congrats on your win, Don! Love, Kim
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Congrats Don on your win.Loved it.
Taylor Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Congrats, Don. Excellent write. Great job. Nice going. Have a great weekend . Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 7:04 PM
congrats DON on an exciting win for this cleverly writtern entry luv.. and so luv the Aussie llingo to enhance it too.. xoxo..
Williams Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:44 PM
no worries mate, outstanding..good luck..dave
Onclaud Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 10:55 AM
oh my, don..buggered up!... creative take for russell's contest; he will be delighted.. win it big time!..:) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 3:37 AM
Like the two last line Don....:) :) Good one!! Have a lovely day hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Poet Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:40 AM
Very nice Monorhyme Don.Best wishes.
Edwards Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:41 AM
Must be an aussie thing lol xx
Edwards Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:28 AM
Fight the good fight Don luv xx Hugs
Johnson Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 3:56 AM
yes lovely lady, hope all is good, your support is really bloody nice, wouldn't change you if i could, for sweetest love, be death the price...
Edwards Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:41 AM
Must be an aussie thing lol xx
Johnson Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:30 AM
that was quick little mate...
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