Candlelight Invite Night

Stained glass candles are winter's delight.
Pulsating prisms pierce frost's bite.
Shadows flap like birds in flight.
With mystery and might,
smoke lifts like a kite.
We embrace tight
candlelight
invite
night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2019 at 12:09 PM
this is lovely, Juliet. Congrats in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Excellent Juliet! One of the best in this contest IMHO. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:30 PM
Thanks, Connie. I appreciate it.
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 1:03 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Juliet :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Thanks, Sunshine Smile.
Messina Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:47 AM
This is a wonderful poem Juliet. Very well done! Congratulations on your win in my contest. ~Charlie
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Thanks, Charles. It was fun to try a new form.
Adams Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 6:13 PM
this is awesome Juliet... love this one, great imagery! i know this task was not easy as i did one myself...yours makes it look easier than it is! hugs
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Thanks, Sandra. I enjoyed reading yours.
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 5:25 PM
Bravo, Juliet. Brilliant. Powerful imagery.
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Thanks, Line.
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Wow, that was so good Juliet. I loved this. I tried writing one of these and ended up deleting it, I just couldn't get it, but you did so wonderfully.
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:47 PM
Thanks, Chris. I appreciate it.
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