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Candlelight Flames Pt 1

Candlelight Flames pt. 1

Strip me with your golden stare
Your golden eyes Your golden hair
Strip me naked in the rain
Dancing and Dancing ~ So beautiful you stand
Dancing and Dancing ~ Your love in my hand
Dancing and Dancing ~ Our love in the sand
This night last forever
Its never the same
Our last dance together 
As you burn ~
my Candlelight Flames

Your eyes held closed so tight
I'll swim in your OCEAN 
As you scream for me in God's name
Your love all scraped down my back
As you scream for me in God's name
up you and in you
and up you and in you
I choke you
Over and Over
and Over and Over ~ I choke you all Over
So helpless you stand
Your life in my hand
as I push you Over
~Your Crying Despair

Now it all just falls apart
Your arms around me
Just fall apart
So just Dance this Last Dance
as you choke in the sand
It all falls apart 
scraping God's name all down my back
Dancing this Dance
as you burn~
 my Candlelight Flames


Contest-- Simply Beautiful #2  by Kelly Deschler 4-19-2015
2nd Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 12:07:00 AM

Christian, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~

Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 5:12:00 AM

you're so RAD Linda, thank you. And Thank you for posting a comment back in 2012 when I posted this, when I was still shy and insecure about sharing my emotions with anyone,, let alone The Entire World

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2015 11:46:00 AM

Great descriptive write very powerful imagery congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Jan. I appreciate your compliment as well as your passion for the art.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/19/2015 7:05:00 PM

A very passionate and powerful write, Christian. Great expressive work! Congrats on the win!

Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 5:07:00 AM

Hi Kelly. Thank you so much for the accolades.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2015 5:01:00 PM

Christian:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2012 9:32:00 PM

CHRISTIAN, romantic and deep, thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD

Christian Alexander
Date: 9/7/2014 4:10:00 AM

Thank you Poet Destroyer A for your words of encouragement~