Candle That Light the Stars

I am here to tell you about the candle that light the stars in my life, 
my life story in a page of love, Its strange but its true,
 some people believe is not possible, but she make it possible in my life, 
Sometime I breath with my eyes
 because is the only way I can see the beauty of the light, 
Your candle as light my stars,
we've had the candle in the rain, 
it's another candle lighten the stars,
 the world was waiting for the stars to light the candle But this time the candle is lighten the stars in the sky, 
Its a new episode of my life
 so everything is new, Turn upside down turn downside up everything is new, Chapter of joy, pages of happiness, 
With cover page widely written finger printed Of new paradise with you, 
Spending the best of our life together
 You are always being there when there is no light
 now you have light the stars for us to see this journey through, 
Candle as light our happiness
 here with me burning till the end,
 The love in this book has made me strong and stronger 
The book that was written from my heart for you,
 I call it the candle brighten the stars
 Like iron sharpens iron your love sharpens my life, 
The impossible was made possible only with the power of love inside us,
 this time Candle as sharpeneth stars,
Specially written to express my burning love for you, 
This moment of my life I am expressing Another side of life full of endless happiness,
 thank to your love that Make this moment possible.
 It's written to show you how I can love you,
 how I am ready to learn how to love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/28/2024 6:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:53:00 AM
VICTOR, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:35:00 AM
Victor,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
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