Brian Duffield Poet Free verse

Candle of the Heart

when fragile candles caress tawny skin, 
you watch the honeyed flame shimmer air. 
This morphs in shade by tinted cream
like jaundiced moths that kiss magenta lips


From 4 SHALLOW LOVE IS LIKE A REVERIE
Verses of metaphors3 by Lu Loo
30/4/2019

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Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2019 at 7:01 PM Very lovely Brian. Congratulations on your second placement! : )

Eve Roper May 24, 2019 at 2:16 PM Beautiful verse, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve Brian Duffield May 24, 2019 at 2:36 PM Truly appreciate your comments

Darlene De Beaulieu May 7, 2019 at 1:17 PM Hello Brian Duffield, I find this poem very romantic. I njoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.