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Candle flames flicker

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Candle Flames Flickers

The candle light flickers for no reason
even when shielded from stray puffs of wind.
It is an internal thing, rhythm within its being,
a vibrato in its song of pixels waved.
A reminder that making light is tough
squeezing vapor from melted wax, that is wicked
up to furnace of burning flame at tip.
Heating electrons in atoms makes them jump
up to higher energy levels above
before electrons drop back, releasing 
splutters of visible light energy.
The process is flawed, with hesitant indecision.
No matter; imperfection can be tolerated in a candle!
There is something charming about flickering, anyway,
When reading a book in soft, warm candle light, 
Something that electric lights can never emulate.
Such modern lights only flicker when faulty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Turner Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 4:27 PM
I really love your style, John. Very intelligent poetry!
Anderson Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thanks for your comment - Cheers
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