Candle

Candle Spark in the dark burns clear, melts fear, brings cheer ready to die spreading the Light Flambeau Cinquain (Traditional) 04.01.17

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/9/2023 2:46:00 PM

A wonderful poem, very well crafted, Joanna. Congratulations on your contest win.

Constance La France

Date: 11/23/2020 11:28:00 AM

Jo, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2020 5:15:00 PM

Again I am here, and this time with a big CONGRATS

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/22/2020 10:23:00 AM

Very creative! You chose a wonderful and unique subject for this contest Jo! Clearly a light in the darkness. Congratulations on your wind!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2020 7:36:00 AM

Creative winner. Congrats on the great win. Sara

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/9/2017 6:55:00 AM

Profound! Congratulations, Jo.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2017 7:27:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Jo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2017 3:46:00 AM

- A beautiful poem that brings cheer, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/4/2017 8:20:00 AM

Really nicely done Jo. I liked everything about this.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/4/2017 8:19:00 AM

Yeah, this is a good one Jo:)

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/4/2017 8:17:00 AM

Nice one Jo, I like the "melts fear" quality of this metaphor.