Candle

Your beautiful and naive soul
is too much to handle

You make me forget who I am
when you're there to light my candle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Larkin Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 5:04 PM
simple, sweet and to the point :) I think the theme is one of a large ranging interest though, maybe consider adding more to this already good poem?
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