Candle

Life
like a candle it burns
as the world slowly turns
I am lost in the winds trapped within my sins
no escaping this reality is not what it seems
it's all like a dream i just want to scream

like a candle burning as the world slowly turns
i feel the rain soaking me
i just want to be free
somebody save me for i cannot fight
somebody blow this candle out 
& just release me
cause like the candle i am burning as my world keeps turning..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 7, 2012 at 12:17 AM
‡ You Are Free, Beautiful Sweet Kerry * No Need To Fret Nor Spin * Just Gaze Beyond The Horizon ... * Can You See, Tis Everlasting Love, Beckoning Unto Thee * You Have Such A Beautiful Heart, My Luv, Rachel ‡
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July 7, 2012 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Rachel, i wrote this for a very dear friend who is like a little lost girl, many hugs to her..
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