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Candle

Such a lonely night as this dark shadows cast from my candle brushing along my room Tis the moon outside my window daunting in her beauty but how I long for you My head rests on my pillow But beside me lays bare Somehow in my thoughts linger your appearance But in my hands lays the empty space meant for your being I await for the next fall of the sun where you come back into my realm and my thoughts turn into reality my bed shared with my love and my candle blown out by the softness from your lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/17/2011 5:03:00 PM
Poetry Assignment# Form: Ballad ~~ Category: fantasy, depression, and art ~ Title: * Kangaroo Cry *
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Date: 6/17/2011 3:03:00 PM
This poem has a nice soft cotton cozy feel to it, and seems as though it was written in the Victorian era.
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Date: 6/17/2011 7:17:00 AM
this is very nicely penned i love candles. cory
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Date: 6/16/2011 2:49:00 PM
Nice and lovely thoughts of yearning, Ashley
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