Robin Davis Poet Rhyme

Cancer Hope

Her curly hair was long and bright
Until that sad and scary night
The cancer took it all away
Leaving her sick night and day
Doctors, IV’s, get well drugs
Kisses, wishes and tight hugs
Are taking over her life now
Wishing that one day somehow
Her life will be normal again
Going out with all her friends
Having fun, not being sick
Searching for a secret trick
That cures every boy and girl
Ending pain across the world
Caused by all this bad disease
She prays can someone help us please

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Skat A October 4, 2013 at 9:13 PM nice win Robin, , congrats......... SKAT

Stacey Brown October 3, 2013 at 8:14 AM congrats on your win, well deserved!!

Robert Davidson October 2, 2013 at 4:19 AM It is the heart cry of many, the cry for help. A very thoughtful write well done Robert(RabCD)

Sandra Adams October 1, 2013 at 6:18 PM such a sad write that tugged at my heart...perhaps because I have watched a few surrender to this disease...congrats on your fine win :)

John Loving Iii October 1, 2013 at 3:57 PM Congrads sad but sweet

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl October 1, 2013 at 10:56 AM Excellent , congratulations Robin xx

Elysabeth Faslund September 24, 2013 at 7:48 AM This sad, but hopeful poem starts with an 8 count and ends with an 8. Between is what we all hope for cancer victims, expressed elegantly. I would, if the author would be inclined, like to see more of this little girl, portrayal, like you started in the first line...excellent.

Poet Destroyer A September 21, 2013 at 11:07 PM Hello Robin, a beautiful description... sadly cancer can take almost everything away... except HOPE.... sad it is! always~ Linda

Jon A Cavanaugh September 21, 2013 at 7:08 PM Such a heartbreaking disease. I pray also that a cure can be found for all cancers. Very moving poem you have written.

Matthew Anish September 21, 2013 at 4:10 PM Had it myself a number of years ago so I can relate to this poem. I wish the best for whomever you are writing about. Lucid, clever work here! Peace And Love Matthew Anish

John Loving Iii September 21, 2013 at 2:28 PM this piece will be remembered by the ones for whom it was writen. cancer is a reminder of our mortality and that we have a chance to reach out to god.