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Cancer Cant Take Soul

Your bald raw beauty. On my way to the barber. To be as stunning. Cancer took your breast away. Yet your heart remains so sweet. Written By: Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT Contest Name : Cantankacerous Sponsor : Joann Grisetti

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/23/2012 9:25:00 AM
love and affection is beyond all definitions and words .true love comes from our inner soul .it is blind . only can feel the affection and love .here beauty or physical appearance is zero or unimportant .yes.i do not consider cancer here as an important .i stress on the real and true meaning of love and affection . perhaps she may be only a body with dying soul .true love never consider ,beauty ,health or wealth and sex .it is so magical .brilliant concept .thank you for sharing .GOD bless you
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Date: 6/20/2012 1:00:00 AM
brave write, elloitt....best of cheers to you for this superb win!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/19/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Contankacerous" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2012 4:54:00 PM
Awesome write,my friend..outstanding piece...Congrats on your win,Elliott....
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Date: 6/18/2012 2:38:00 PM
I feel the intense respect and emotion! beautifully spoken, Elliot!
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Date: 6/17/2012 1:28:00 AM
This definitely leaves an impact, Elliot! I really like how you showed the support and love here-- shaving one's head in support of a person with cancer. And yes, what's important is what's inside--the heart. Beautiful tanka! :D
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Date: 6/16/2012 10:47:00 PM
Stunning message of a completely supportive mate! Incredible entry to compliment a passionate title too. Break a leg with this one, Elliot! I smell gold! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/16/2012 7:07:00 PM
This poem is simple, yet so true! LOVING IT!!! It's so deep... from the heart. Oh, and by the way I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you get paid. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem.
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Date: 6/16/2012 6:24:00 PM
Elliott, cancer can ruin one... I'm just glad it can't touch and ruin every thing inside of us... ..xox~pd
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Date: 6/16/2012 6:17:00 PM
Cancer really sucks! But your right,it can't take your soul... Nice write!
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Date: 6/16/2012 6:12:00 PM
Very sweet
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