William Kelii Kekaula Poet Limerick

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Poetic Form: Limerick

Inspired: 2024 July 25

Image: Military Salute

Can-be Beach, Fourth of July

Dear, get me a cocktail, ... those fruity ones,
Me with no glasses, ... No miss, errs or runs,
saluting sounds of conscience
smoking fumes are obnoxious
he strayed, two sunbathed girls, "Dears, it's the guns."

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Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2024 at 2:08 PM Congrats on your win, Hilo. Hope things are going well for you William Kelii Kekaula August 20, 2024 at 10:43 PM Great Andrea, and many thanks. San Jose turned out to be a nice replacement for Rio. West coast really nice, enjoying. Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2024 at 2:42 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative Limerick write. Great Picture....  Have a fun day writing away.................... William Kelii Kekaula August 18, 2024 at 5:07 PM Be it a surprise--not if rise as a gift from the prize, thanks Paula. Aloha William

Tania Kitchin August 18, 2024 at 9:13 AM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick. William Kelii Kekaula August 18, 2024 at 5:14 PM Most inherently generous of you, Tania, keep your gift for the many who'll call you for the need of it. Aloha William