Canada Geese Making Altitude

Like a mess of hooting school kids freed for vacation,
They come honking and scolding

Long before you see them they come honking and scolding

Hidden from sight by leafy trees,
They are loudly scolding, urging, bragging,
“Get flapping”. “My turn to lead.” “Your turn to lead. “Let Fergus lead,”
I imagine. 

When at last overhead I can see them and they are honking, without rhythm. 
Honking, and forming lines;

A long line at first, a perfect line, 
Then a splinter slides astride 
And two perfect lines form, a skewered vee.

A flying wing it is now, yawing left, and then yawing right, 
Sensing the wind’s direction, its velocity,
Looking for a helping wind. Looking for a lift.

And honking and scolding.

They pass behind more leafy trees and they are gone,
Still honking and scolding,
Still searching for the streaming air.

And going southward.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Don, a beautiful poem expressed with lovely and lively imagery. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cameron Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Thank you Susan. I've been writing for awhile but I am new at this and appreciate your comment
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October 24, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Great first post.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Cameron Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Silent One. I meant to reply to your comment when I got it but didn't know how. Now that I do I really feel dense!
White Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:02 AM
What a beautiful poem! You can call this a Prose Poem, it's not Blank Verse because that has very strict rules :) Great nature imagery in your poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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