Can You See Me

Something about this place doesn't seem right
I hear nothing
No birds, no screams, no whispers
I can see the foggy mist covering the path
I cannot see anyone , or anything
No trees, no humans, just nothing...

As I keep on walking I see a teddy bear lying on the parking lot
No cars are there all alone on the floor in the middle of nowhere.

I can feel the cold from the teddy bear's fur all wet
I wonder if it feels lonely
Needed a friend to hug 
I wonder if anyone can see it
I picked it up wondering if it sees me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 24, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Oh I really love this one. Great work. I can feel what you wrote. God Bless
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