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Can You See Me

Something about this place doesn't seem right I hear nothing No birds, no screams, no whispers I can see the foggy mist covering the path I cannot see anyone , or anything No trees, no humans, just nothing... As I keep on walking I see a teddy bear lying on the parking lot No cars are there all alone on the floor in the middle of nowhere. I can feel the cold from the teddy bear's fur all wet I wonder if it feels lonely Needed a friend to hug I wonder if anyone can see it I picked it up wondering if it sees me.

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Date: 10/24/2016 9:51:00 AM
Oh I really love this one. Great work. I can feel what you wrote. God Bless
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