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Can You See Me

Does anyone see, The me inside me? Does anyone care, If I’m even here? Does anyone try, To comfort my cry? Does anyone show, Love I need to grow? Does anyone hear, All of my fear? Does anyone say, How was your day? They walk right by, And inside I die.

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Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/14/2018 10:16:00 AM

I'm in awe of your poetry Daisy.

Roy Pett

Date: 6/9/2018 5:37:00 AM

Well written couplets Daisy, I interpret your poem to the state of society today where human interest is totally lacking, over the years due to a lack of a common cause we have become detached from social interaction which is alien as humans are social creatures in turn causes us to get distressed, forgive me if I have got the wrong end of the stick, I found your poem interesting and a joy to read my friend. :))

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/8/2018 6:45:00 AM

Hi...it's lovely to see you here...Nice write...All the best

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/8/2018 5:49:00 AM

The Angels have heard you and see you...and now will comfort you...for a breath of Angels will come your way...a whisper of hope to brighten your day...love and light...^WW^