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Can You See Me

Does anyone see,
The me inside me?

Does anyone care,
If I’m even here?

Does anyone try,
To comfort my cry?

Does anyone show,
Love I need to grow?

Does anyone hear,
All of my fear?

Does anyone say,
How was your day?

They walk right by,
And inside I die.

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Elizabeth Kinch

July 14, 2018 at 10:16 AM

I'm in awe of your poetry Daisy.

Roy Pett

June 9, 2018 at 5:37 AM

Well written couplets Daisy, I interpret your poem to the state of society today where human interest is totally lacking, over the years due to a lack of a common cause we have become detached from social interaction which is alien as humans are social creatures in turn causes us to get distressed, forgive me if I have got the wrong end of the stick, I found your poem interesting and a joy to read my friend. :))

Arturo Michael

June 8, 2018 at 6:45 AM

Hi...it's lovely to see you here...Nice write...All the best

Winged Warrior

June 8, 2018 at 5:49 AM

The Angels have heard you and see you...and now will comfort you...for a breath of Angels will come your way...a whisper of hope to brighten your day...love and light...^WW^

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