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Can You Remember

Can you remember Our thirst for love The strong beating of hearts When we’re together Can you remember What I have told you Your body that haunts mine Breathing the pleasure inside me Can you even remember The way you have touched me, Leaving those wet fingerprints As the memory of our paradise //Olivia

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/18/2024 9:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Patricia Lawton

Date: 2/14/2017 7:40:00 AM

This is a nice verse and thank you for sharing. Memories mean't to be shared. thank you. hug x.