Dawn Montanez Poet Quatrain

Can You Remember

Can you remember
Our thirst for love
The strong beating of hearts
When we’re together

Can you remember
What I have told you
Your body that haunts mine
Breathing the pleasure inside me

Can you even remember
The way you have touched me,
Leaving those wet fingerprints 
As the memory of our paradise

//Olivia

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Beata Agustin December 18, 2024 at 9:18 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Patricia Lawton February 14, 2017 at 7:40 AM This is a nice verse and thank you for sharing. Memories mean't to be shared. thank you. hug x.