Can You Help Me I'M Lost

lost and weary soles
looking for their better half
at Auschwitz bone yard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 16, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Wow! This one makes a point in a powerful way--especially the last line. Your talent shines in this one. Keep up the good writing my friend. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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May 14, 2010 at 5:40 AM
sigh...sad sad topic! Good luck,,Light & Love
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May 11, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Very nice, Katherine...thnx for your comments on my work....Jimmy
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May 10, 2010 at 8:26 PM
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