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Can You Hear the Cowslips

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Listen carefully: those are bells ringing. To whom are they calling? From where come the peals? Here in the wild countryside the pale-yellow cowslips dance a lonely jig to the tune of the wayward breeze, dispersing their melliferous fragrance, gracing us with their herbal remedies. And still the bells peal! Do they toll for me? Reminding me of my needs? Shall I gather the cowslips? What shall I do with weeds? There see them grow in the vale or along the riverbanks where waters rush headlong, zigzagging through the silvery alleys, making their way to the far off sea. And the bells still peal! The cowslips sway in the breeze. I stand still devoid of fantasy, empty of coherent dreams. What will I gain from cowslips? except distil it in my cellar and enjoy its narcotic sips? Still do the bells toll? Why? What for? My heart knows, of course. I find a shade, I kneel, I pray. Let the bells toll. I've heard as cowslips bend their heads.

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Date: 6/27/2021 8:08:00 PM
I like this, I am a naturalist, using herbal tinctures, natural medicine; it appeals. Nicely crafted penning and it never hurts to have a little extra distillation, just in case...enjoyed.
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Date: 6/21/2021 2:47:00 PM
WoW! Victor, What a well-written write on cowslips. Lovely imagery as well. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/20/2021 8:21:00 PM
A lovely poem praising cowslips which ultimately lead to praising and thanking God:) beautiful, Victor:)
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Date: 6/20/2021 5:46:00 PM
Not only are they lovely to see but the flower and the root are used to make medicine. The flower is mostly used for swollen nose and throat and for bronchitis. Also for sleep aides, headaches, muscle spasms and for hysteria and tremors, to increase urine production, whooping cough,asthma, gout etc. Prepare as a tea nd drink one cup 3 times a day. The root is also useful. Just look it up on google. Lovely poem Victor. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/20/2021 5:40:00 PM
You've been blessed with so much love in your heart... Bless you
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Date: 6/20/2021 4:24:00 PM
The sounds of beautiful flowers ringing, calls for being listened to with heart and soul. A simply beautiful verse with charming thoughts to take away, Victor. :)
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Date: 6/20/2021 4:20:00 PM
A beautiful poem about the beautiful cowslip Victor, I do hear them ring in tune with the wind, those lovely bell heads what charm they bring… Belle
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Date: 6/20/2021 12:10:00 PM
you created lots of imagery with this one for cowslips. A very nicely crafted nature poem, victor.
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Date: 6/20/2021 12:01:00 PM
At one with nature and so beautifully spiritual Victor:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/20/2021 8:40:00 AM
Victor, 'Can you hear the Cowslips'. Yes indeed, I love a poem that entreats the reader to open their eyes and ears to the world. You gave them quite a voice in the pealing of bells. Happy Father's Day. -Richard
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:31:00 AM
Wow, A figurative outpouring of your's heart that is in touch with nature and God has a powerful effect on me. I enjoyed reading this remarkable piece. Blessings and best wishes
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:00:00 AM
Ahh!! I can feel the opening of a heart in tune with nature and God. I enjoyed reading this emotive, descriptive and expressive work. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 6/20/2021 4:25:00 AM
Really beautiful sounds of nature, Victor. Enjoyed the ride through your scenic depiction. Excellent images you created.
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Date: 6/20/2021 1:01:00 AM
You take us to the countryside where in the distance the bells peal, a call to the faithful maybe. Tom
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Date: 6/19/2021 11:22:00 PM
the hearing is by heart; the feeling is by solemn soul~ well crafted the poetic words
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