Can You Hear Me?

i wanna vent like Bukowski
but the censors won't let me

be heard

won't let me cock my hat
and unload my gun
won't let me

be heard

i wanna howl like Ginsberg
but the censors don't like

my words

my swagger Redd Foxx like
when allowed to write

my words

i bet i could keep you up at night
if you allowed me to

be heard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Great Work, powerful words, love the references to the different people.
Wood Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 4:14 PM
TRIPLE WOW! Good pop culture references! Thanks
Loveless Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 7:35 AM
wow, this is amazing i love your work!
Austin Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 2:59 PM
Sorry, Brian, I find I haven't posted Lace Mary Jane yet, but I will in the next day or two. Meanwhile, keep your good stuff coming. Love, daver
Dawood Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 11:14 PM
Wow is correct. Lovely write, and you write on my friend!!! Thank you for your sweet comments on my poetry. Peace Fathima
Shango Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 7:13 AM
Wow! wow! wow! No shackles on my eyes brother, you say stuff that haunts a man like when bill bo jangles dance. Thanks for the friendship, love it!
Austin Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Hi, Brian. For me, Bukowski -Chenaski, he calls himself - is one of the great poets...Most of the world will agree. He has something to say, and you don't need a damn thesaurus to read his stuff. So many poets fancy themselves sophisticated.....C.B. is REALLY sophisticated, the right sort, not afraid to use four-letter words. The soup is different and I sort of agree. You might like Fan Story. Love, daver
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