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Can You Hear Me?

i wanna vent like Bukowski but the censors won't let me be heard won't let me cock my hat and unload my gun won't let me be heard i wanna howl like Ginsberg but the censors don't like my words my swagger Redd Foxx like when allowed to write my words i bet i could keep you up at night if you allowed me to be heard

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Charlene Bird

Date: 4/17/2009 10:52:00 AM

Great Work, powerful words, love the references to the different people.

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 4/16/2009 4:14:00 PM

TRIPLE WOW! Good pop culture references! Thanks

Julie Loveless

Date: 4/16/2009 7:35:00 AM

wow, this is amazing i love your work!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/20/2009 2:59:00 PM

Sorry, Brian, I find I haven't posted Lace Mary Jane yet, but I will in the next day or two. Meanwhile, keep your good stuff coming. Love, daver

Fathima Dawood

Date: 3/16/2009 11:14:00 PM

Wow is correct. Lovely write, and you write on my friend!!! Thank you for your sweet comments on my poetry. Peace Fathima

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/16/2009 7:13:00 AM

Wow! wow! wow! No shackles on my eyes brother, you say stuff that haunts a man like when bill bo jangles dance. Thanks for the friendship, love it!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/16/2009 6:12:00 AM

Hi, Brian. For me, Bukowski -Chenaski, he calls himself - is one of the great poets...Most of the world will agree. He has something to say, and you don't need a damn thesaurus to read his stuff. So many poets fancy themselves sophisticated.....C.B. is REALLY sophisticated, the right sort, not afraid to use four-letter words. The soup is different and I sort of agree. You might like Fan Story. Love, daver