Can You Guess Who I Am

Can You Guess Who I Am

I could hide a giraffe in my enormous nest.
Twenty feet deep, from crest to crest.
I soar over the countryside and spy a small beagle.
Can you guess who I am? Of course.
I am a bald eagle!

By Caren Krutsinger/ April 1, 2023

My poem inspired by her light verse rhyme:

Can You Guess Who I Am

Food for a year I’ve hidden away,
and it’s well protected from those of my kind.
In a place like a cave I let my food stay
where no other mammals can seek and find.
Though I’m not enormous like a bear,
you’d be surprised the amount I can eat.
Deep down in my habitat is the place where
I’ve stored up my grub; some even is sweet.
No, I am not a huge bumble bee, 
but I’m busy like one, so I eat stuff all day.
Can you guess who I am? The answer is me!
And I’ll out-eat a lumberjack at a buffet!

April 21, 2023 for  Margarita Lillico's "Find Your PS Muse" Poetry Contest
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May Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Lol, So funny Andrea, best wishes
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Humorous as intended, well done, Andrea:) Caren is a great inspiration:)
Y. Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Lol! Andrea, I see why you inspired Caren with this well written write. Bumble bee did pop into mind. I liked your funny ending. Best wishes in the contest. I'm up late reading poems. Have a good evening and weekend:-)Alexis
Rolland Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 7:14 PM
caren has such talent, she inspires the best, thanks for the enjoyable penning to you both
Edmonds  Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Very good Andrea, l love to read poems inspired by another poet, well done! ~ Belle
Bauer Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Ha! Very entertaining, Andrea! I enjoyed…
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