Steve Meadows Poet Free verse

Can You Feel It?

You're getting old
Can you feel it?
Its getting cold
Can you feel it?

Houses shivering
Pizzas delivering
Young male quivering
Can you feel it?

Life is love
Love is death
Whispering secrets
Under your breath
Can you feel it?

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2010 at 2:23 PM INteresting read, Steve!

Karla Null August 8, 2009 at 6:58 PM Where have you been, miss your poetry...Karla

Jessica Arteaga July 30, 2009 at 6:16 PM this one is really good, it feel it has more meaning to me. very good!

Monique Mcmiller July 28, 2009 at 6:36 PM Pretty good poem

Gert W. Knop July 28, 2009 at 4:40 AM Yes, Steve, I feel it. Very poetic your passage: Whispering secrets under your breath! Gert

Bill Doggett July 27, 2009 at 8:56 AM Great poem Steve, Yes I can feel it....Bill

Shirin Neshat July 26, 2009 at 3:37 AM love can be good and bad it alwas comes with both.

Carolyn Devonshire July 25, 2009 at 7:54 AM Nice use of rhyme, Steve, and I think we can all "feel" the effects of getting older. Interesting transition from life to love to death. Well done. Love, Carolyn