Can You Feel?

Feel. Feel. Just feel
Love, Love

Mine, mine

Hmm.

Hmm. Hmm. Where is yours
   Dropped a heart for you down

       Loved you. A home. Empty home
          No life. I haven’t. Just drink. Alcohol

Can you feel?
The suffering?

I drink. Because of the dream. Life is yours
  Yours. Life is going on with you. Please. Yours

Take the love
  Take
      Take
          Home

Take love
   Drop my
      Drop mine

It is love
   It was love
      A real love

A love 
   From me

Hmm. This is not your mistake
  This is my situation. Fault. Mistake

Hmm. My life. Hmm. Remembering
  To your life. But the way was closed

To your heart. It was sad, my hope and desire
   Loving you a lot. Loving you a lot. But feel

But feel
  But feel

Love
  Love

You
  You

Hmm
  Hmm
  
My heart
  A beating
     Still alive

Hmm. Can you imagine?
   Hmm. Our lives. All
       The perfect desires

Can’t exist without you
   Can it be life? Of you?

        No. No
               Life is not yours

Ours.
Reality

Feel
Feel

Yours
Yours

Ours
Ours

Hmm
Hmm

Where is
My dove?
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