Can You

Can you hear the sound
The sound of my heart beating,
Now that it has found
The piece that it was needing...
Can you feel each pound
Radiating from my chest,
Satin lace lays all around
As you slowly get undressed...
Can you sense how deep
How deep I'm into you,
That every time you fall asleep
I know you're dreaming too...
Can you handle love
And all I have to give,
It's the one thing that's above
Everything I need to live...can you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 15, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Totally enjoyed this Terrence! Reminds me of one of my entitled, "Can You Hear Me?" Beautiful and sweet. Peace, Audrey
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September 15, 2010 at 10:36 AM
It was pleasure to read your poetry today Terrence. Love, Carol
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