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Can Or Can'T

"You can't!" the world snorted; "Yes I can," you fired back. Your proud retort Some proof did lack.

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Date: 3/8/2018 1:33:00 PM
This one looks easy but I'm not fooled. I know it's not.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for the insight(ful comment), Caren. You're right. It wasn't easy: I first wrote this in December in 4 minutes--but it was based on a lifetime of experience...Then I revised it once in February, and again a couple of days ago. (Last one took at least 10 minutes). Reflecting back, I see that I should do this with ALL of my poems...I believe that Susan Ashley takes her time with her poems, and just look at her results: Every poem a winner!... O.K. Thanks, again! :) gw

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