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Can I Tell You My Secrets

can i tell you my secret? a secret so sad that your eyes fill and you start to cry a secret so sad that you could never imagine can i tell you my secret? a secret so horrible that it makes you want to die a secret so horrible that you quiver in fear can i tell you my secret? a secret of happiness a happiness that never ends can i tell you my secret? a secret of betrayal that cuts you so deep it will never heal can i tell you my secret? a secret of love and pain that if i tell you my heart has been hurt and beats no more you are willing to give me yours so will you keep all my secrets? these secrets i hold dear will you lock them away never to be heard? to only you i whisper these secrets i ask you now once more can i tell you my secrets?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/2/2010 9:10:00 AM
my best like in this poem i think is "if i tell you my heart has been hurt and beats no more you are willing to give me yours" i think it is so pretty and moving
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:32:00 PM
A poem of anticipation and the revelation of what your secrets are. I like the tempo of this poem. And use of the lowercase i. Love, Susan
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