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Can I Really Look Up To You

I've seen you around a man or two Woderous pairs you were Again everyday a new pair your beauty is replaced by make up Your face replaced by plastic Your body is alive yet rotting Your lungs always filled with smoke You are so beautiful and enlightening You are smart but act dumb Why, Why, Why is that so? What makes you different from the rest? Can i really look up to you Mama?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/25/2013 1:52:00 PM
I wasn't expecting that ending. Such a powerful & bold writing. Fantastic job.
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