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Can I Love Thee More

Can I love thee more? If love be less than fate in life's reprieve, then no, I could not love thee more, alas, with Cupid's dart shot. Yes, I love in thee thy comely face and yet, my love's defined as only time can, grown in age as bold new found love cannot. Yes, I love thee more with each cherished thought. Yes, I love thee more in God's precise plan. Yes, I love thee more in lover's embrace. When in life the turbid winds divide us, I will love thee more in rapturous grace. I will keep this love safe in my aegis, and at end of day let death take my place, then with sweet voice sing a dirge for Eros. 02/12/16 (Trochaic Pentameter)

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Date: 2/23/2016 5:42:00 PM
Did it not win, my friend? I see no congrats. I did not win either. It is one for you to enter in a screwed contest.
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James Inman
Date: 2/23/2016 8:28:00 PM
Really hadn't paid any attention to it. I'll have to look up the contest.
Date: 2/20/2016 8:47:00 AM
Beautiful and lovely, both ... CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 2/20/2016 10:02:00 AM
As are you CayCay. Thank you.
Date: 2/12/2016 8:36:00 PM
very well executed, my friend. I think it is gonna be on the winner list.
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James Inman
Date: 2/12/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.

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