Can I Have You

I feel good to have L
what I feel for you won't make you go through hell
in loving you am definitely going to do that well
with a smile on my face I have O
come into my life and make ma heart whole 
what I feel for you right now is beyond control 
it made me realize I have V
with you is where I would rather be can't you see 
just to be with you I can cross the ocean and cross the sea 
and see what I have got E
they say what will be will be 
to have a fruitful life love is key 
truly when I close my eyes all I see is you 
with the four letters L O V E close to my heart 
and my eyes closed with my mind open I say 
can I have YOU
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 6, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Tunaldo Naldo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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November 18, 2015 at 12:30 PM
awesome so sweet. SKAT
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April 13, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thank you
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