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Can I Be Beautiful Still

It’s 5:00am
My life, and what’s to come, and what’s over
Expands towards me and recedes
I hear voices in the water, 
Bending, twisting, arguing, 
Quiet, cutting conversations
Debating my form, throwing rocks 
Pebbles, layering me with mud
Algae, with jeans, with orders, 
Shirts, videos, machines, receipts, recipes 
I’m heavy with edits and plans 
Burdened soles of feet on slippery rocks
So many piles and mountains of things 
It gets tricky to see the horizon 
And to hold myself, to touch me
To cradle and to embrace me 
But I ask to love still, to feel the wind
To keep seeing clear with blue eyes
Sometimes that’s all I can do
Content with what I carry, 
And wading, for a moment, into warmth 

3/10/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 12:01 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Jeremy.
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement! An interesting write, symbolic I think, of our lives.
Martin Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Thanks!
Lawless Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:57 AM
ah yes, the rigors of life crowd into the day and obscure the beauty of who we are as we strive to be....Thanks for entering the contest Jeremy
Martin Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Thanks for the placement!
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