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Camping Gone Bad

bushes berry filled
mouth stuffed, sated, stone stands up
black bear! I’m holed, freed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Liwayway Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 8:39 AM
very nice haiku friend Sheri :) thanks for passing by. Have a nice day!!
Posey Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:32 AM
Haikus can be a lot of fun... This one was no exception... sometimes surprises come in furry packages.... lol... Jake
Horne Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 2:53 PM
lol, had a chuckle here, Sheri
Yamin Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Hi Sheri! This is a beautiful Haiku. Very impressive. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem All for you. I am grateful -Mohammad
A   Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 9:41 PM
Hello Sheri :-) wishing a very nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 3:19 PM
enjoyed this haiku : )
Johnson Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 9:42 AM
You've gotta' watch out for those hairy black stones. :) Maybe it was related to Harry. Wasn't that his name, the magician? Harry Blackstone. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 4:17 PM
Vivid imagery in this entertaining and enjoyable haiku entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 3:28 PM
hey, now I really understand this one even better. I did mine on the bear too!
A   Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:48 PM
Sheri, I don't like camping... LOL, now I know why... it has nothing to do with all them camp movies i'd seen... love the haiku...xox~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Enjoyed reading your exciting Haiku..If for the contest, reads like a winner to me..Thansk for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 7:20 AM
:)) - Like it - well done Sheri! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 12:50 AM
Funny title!! It looks like you got caught up in Charles' camping tale? I need to read about that camping trip myself.
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