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bushes berry filled mouth stuffed, sated, stone stands up black bear! I’m holed, freed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/30/2013 8:39:00 AM
very nice haiku friend Sheri :) thanks for passing by. Have a nice day!!
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:32:00 AM
Haikus can be a lot of fun... This one was no exception... sometimes surprises come in furry packages.... lol... Jake
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Date: 5/24/2013 2:53:00 PM
lol, had a chuckle here, Sheri
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Date: 5/15/2013 3:19:00 PM
Hi Sheri! This is a beautiful Haiku. Very impressive. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my poem All for you. I am grateful -Mohammad
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:41:00 PM
Hello Sheri :-) wishing a very nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 5/5/2013 3:19:00 PM
enjoyed this haiku : )
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Date: 5/1/2013 9:42:00 AM
You've gotta' watch out for those hairy black stones. :) Maybe it was related to Harry. Wasn't that his name, the magician? Harry Blackstone. :)
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Date: 4/30/2013 4:17:00 PM
Vivid imagery in this entertaining and enjoyable haiku entry. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:28:00 PM
hey, now I really understand this one even better. I did mine on the bear too!
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:48:00 PM
Sheri, I don't like camping... LOL, now I know why... it has nothing to do with all them camp movies i'd seen... love the haiku...xox~ PD
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Date: 4/28/2013 2:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your exciting Haiku..If for the contest, reads like a winner to me..Thansk for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:20:00 AM
:)) - Like it - well done Sheri! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/28/2013 12:50:00 AM
Funny title!! It looks like you got caught up in Charles' camping tale? I need to read about that camping trip myself.
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