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Campfires Dance

The campfire radiated warmth in the chilled night As excitement of the flames danced across dark tree trunks Wisps of silver grey smoke moved in rhythm matching every curve and dip Mesmerizing glowing orange embers ascend on nature's breath whispering kisses making the gentle breeze looked flushed All leaving one feeling intoxicated watching this warm breathtaking dance

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John Fleming

Date: 9/15/2019 6:09:00 AM

Sounds all rather lovely...after all what more nicer and more heartening than any sort of warming fire. Delightful little poem, Brenda. With much fondness. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/29/2019 4:11:00 AM

Thank you John so much! All my affection!;)

John Lawless

Date: 9/14/2019 8:05:00 AM

Yes they do dance and carry us off into dreams....Beautifully written Brenda

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/14/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much John I really appreciate your read and comments!;)

J. I. Thomas F.

Date: 9/13/2019 10:23:00 PM

Reading this was like being spellbound while watching a campfire. Nice job!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/14/2019 12:10:00 AM

Thank you so much!;)

Kenneth R. Merrill

Date: 9/12/2019 3:36:00 PM

Hi Brenda! Great write: “making the gentle breeze look flushed...” I love that image! Thanks, my friend ~ Ken

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 11:00:00 PM

Kenneth thank you so very much!;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/12/2019 11:57:00 AM

Brilliant, This was so good Brenda. You capture the visual enchantment of a glowing campfire so nicely in this wonderful poem. Still bringing the heat I see. : )

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:02:00 PM

Lmao! Thanks Chris! But your not suppose to use words I would use for you'! Lol! Ok then you are the one bringing it!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/12/2019 11:56:00 AM

the flame's dance is intensified through your words...one could see this one come to life, wonderful penning :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:01:00 PM

Sandy thank you my friend for stopping by!;) and the lovely comment!;)

Disco Freak

Date: 9/12/2019 11:46:00 AM

Brilliant poem. Some of my fondest memories happened around a campfire.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:01:00 PM

Ahh thank you so very much!;)