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Campers

under the night sky
huddled around the camp fire ~
marshmallow roasting


Haiku or Senyru Poetry Contest  (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Date written: 07/19/2020

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Line Gauthier

August 2, 2020 at 5:13 AM

Lovely imagery and feeling. Congrats on your win, Edward.

Edward Ibeh

August 2, 2020 at 6:05 AM

Thank you so much, Line:-)

Kai Michael Neumann

July 30, 2020 at 5:19 AM

So delightful. Kind wishes, Kai

Edward Ibeh

July 30, 2020 at 6:53 AM

Thank you so much, Kai:-)

Constance La France

July 29, 2020 at 4:57 PM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write _Constance

Aditi Mishra

July 28, 2020 at 12:10 PM

This is such a creative muse on camping. It paints that soothing picture of adventures under a starry sky. Congratulations on your win Edward! :)

Edward Ibeh

July 28, 2020 at 3:50 PM

Thank you so much, dear Aditi:-) Most obliged.

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:36 PM

Lovely Haiku Edward.. Congrats on your great win..

Edward Ibeh

July 27, 2020 at 3:14 AM

Thank you so much, Jenish:-)

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 7:38 PM

Love this. I am not big on camping, but the roasting of hot dogs and those marshamallows is the one thing I really look forward to. Big congrats on your win, Edward.

Edward Ibeh

July 26, 2020 at 7:46 PM

Thank you, Andrea:-) I'm glad you loved it!

Eve Roper

July 26, 2020 at 4:11 PM

Edward, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Edward Ibeh

July 26, 2020 at 4:42 PM

Thank very much, Eve:-)

Jan Allison

July 26, 2020 at 4:01 PM

mmm I'm salivating at the thought of the toasted marshmallows:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ibeh

July 26, 2020 at 4:44 PM

Thank you, Jan:-) That makes two of us!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 26, 2020 at 11:10 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

July 26, 2020 at 2:21 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 23, 2020 at 3:01 AM

So charming and appealing Haiku dearest, Edward!

Edward Ibeh

July 23, 2020 at 3:24 AM

Thank you so much, Demetrios:-)

Tom Cunningham

July 21, 2020 at 10:02 PM

Perfect image Edward, one I think most of us will have experienced Good luck in the contest Tom

Edward Ibeh

July 22, 2020 at 3:59 PM

Thank you very much indeed, Tom:-)

Kim Rodrigues

July 21, 2020 at 8:34 PM

Delicious night!

Edward Ibeh

July 22, 2020 at 3:58 PM

It's the marshmallows, Kim:-) Yum!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 19, 2020 at 8:19 PM

I wish, right now, I wish ;), xomo

Edward Ibeh

July 19, 2020 at 8:41 PM

That makes two of us, PT!:-)

Gershon Wolf

July 19, 2020 at 7:24 PM

Can't beat this scene around the campfire... Of course, gotta wait til the flames on the marshmallows die down before eating 'em. I didn't wait long enough once... Fire Extinguisher! help! lol.

Edward Ibeh

July 19, 2020 at 7:58 PM

Ouch! There's nothing worse than a burnt tongue! I'm just glad you didn't set yourself on fire, Gershon! Teeheehee....

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