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Camoflaged No More

the blanket of snow
marked only by tracks of birds
hunting for a meal
dark brown heads against stark white
camoflaged no more by trees







* see 'about this poem" for photo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 26, 2012 at 12:33 AM
hey thanks for the cute photo to go with this enjoyable tanka, Francine, and thanks so much for my placement in your contest. Luv, Andrea
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January 18, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Great imagery, and a stark reality how quick one's 'camo' can be neutralized by nature and God's will.
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