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(Using the Mgur poetry form, Tibetan in origin, which is 5 lines long, each consisting of 6 syllables.)

Camino de Santiago

Toilsome journey taken
Challenging resistance
Seeking self-awareness
In reflective moments
Connect with the divine

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CayCay Godwin

March 15, 2026 at 11:09 PM

Very well done, I bet Nette likes it. Hope you are well and then some. I don't come by enough for absolutely no reason. I shall focus because you've always been there, you are an original Soup face, to me.

Paul Callus

March 16, 2026 at 8:48 AM

Thank you for liking ... and I'm glad you came visiting today, CayCay...been a while since our paths crossed. Hope you are keeping well. It's now my 12th year on Soup!! Take care // paul

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2026 at 5:46 AM

A journey not just of arduous travel but also spiritual in reflection.

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 4:27 AM

You expressed it perfectly well, KIm! It is a journey worth taking! ~ Best regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

March 2, 2026 at 2:15 PM

Truly a journey of faith, Paul, with every experience so beautifully conveyed. Sending you blessings for your journey!

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 4:19 AM

Glad you enjoyed my first attempt at a Mgur poetry form, Sam. Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards & Blessings // paul

Paula Goldsmith

February 26, 2026 at 11:22 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative write. Great last line. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Hope you are OK... Have a blessed day writing away................

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 4:10 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Paula. I'm very busy, but I do my best to visit my friends on Soup. Hope you are keeping well. Regards & Blessings // paul

Abdullah Alhemaidy

February 26, 2026 at 9:26 AM

Hello Paul :-) Sweet write!

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 4:04 AM

Thank you, Abdullah. Pleased to see you again :) // paul

Daniel Henry Rodgers

February 26, 2026 at 8:06 AM

Hello Paul, this little Mgur carries such calm strength. Like a step on the path, effort, resistance, reflection, until the poem opens into that final, spacious connection with the divine. Amen! A beautifully centered piece. Blessings, Daniel

Paul Callus

March 14, 2026 at 3:57 AM

Thank you for stopping by with much appreciated feedback, Daniel. Best regards // paul