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Camellia


We know her as Camellia...that fine name,
a perfect one for someone sweet as she;
her silky skin and amber eyes proclaim
a charming, pristine beauty, all agree.

Just like the flower's petals, pure and white
are shaped into a cup of perfect form,
Camellia molds her care to help them fight
the painful journey to more healthy norm.

Our dear Camellia comes most every day
to nurture our close friend who cannot walk.
Her tenderness and kindness lead the way
with her fine therapy and gentle talk.

Her steadfastness and excellence outshine
the beauty and the presence she portrays;
it's what's inside her heart that is sublime
and marks her loveliness in many ways.

Just as the flower does, Camellia lives,
with meaning of a pure and lovely soul;
perfection, beauty, in the care she gives
to her dear patients...help, her only goal.

August 25, 2016

~13th Place~
Contest: And In Words, She Blooms
Sponsor: Casarah Nance
Judged: 09/14/2016


"The symmetrical beauty and long-lasting quality of the flower have long been appreciated. White camellias with their pristine and pure hue depict an adorable quality. The white blossom may also symbolize perfection without blemish. Camellias, no matter what the color have meanings attached to them like steadfastness, and excellence. Once the white Camellias go into its fully bloomed form, it takes the shape of a delicate cup of petals...for the white camellia, getting blossoms with a perfectly shaped cup will embody your message of admiration for someone’s adorable qualities."
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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 4:09 PM
This is really lovely Sandra. Congratulations on your placement. I am reading so many wonderful entries, I am sure glad I didn't have to be the one to judge this contest! 7 ; )
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Connie, for the lovely comment, congratulations and fine rating. Yes, so many lovely flower poems for sure! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Wow Sandra, I had no idea how beautiful that flower was. I actually heard of it but never saw it before. beautifully written lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much, Laura! This is one of my favorites! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:45 PM
Very very beautiful Sandra many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Nusker Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Fabulous poem. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so much, Afzal. Sandra
May Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Camellias are indeed very beautiful...A lovely write Sandra...
Turner Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:45 PM
An absolutely stunning photo! The poem is very heartwarming and inspirational. I enjoyed reading you today Mrs Sandra. I hope you are well!
Gupta Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Nicely elaborate description ... instructive ...
Rycroft Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Great poem x great flower well chosen x good words x
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