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Came the Knock Upon My Door

'Twas the night of hallows eve Outside I heard screaming, Children were trick or treating, They were happy halloweening. Came the knock upon my door Loudly, it rapped twice. Sweets in hand I opened it, To be greeted by a scythe. A grim reaper, I said "I love it Your costume's such a blast," A voice said "fool, I come for you For tonight you breathe your last." Laughing I cried " brilliant! Your voice is scary too, Hold out your goody bag For I have treats for you." He reached out a fleshless hand I smelt his fetid breath, This was no trick or treat, In his eyes, I saw death. Entry for Halloween Night Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 21/10/18

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Date: 11/3/2018 8:44:00 PM
Well penned, Gary. Congrats on your win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/4/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 11/2/2018 11:11:00 AM
So good my friend! A well deserved win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/2/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thank you P.M. :)
Date: 11/1/2018 7:47:00 PM
Nicely done...Congrats on your win
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/2/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. :)
Date: 11/1/2018 7:10:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED WIN! Janice
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/1/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Janice. :)
Date: 11/1/2018 6:19:00 AM
Nicely done, I almost D/Q for the title but had to place it, it was intriguing, scary and well done, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/1/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Tania. :)
Date: 10/22/2018 11:08:00 AM
It was a pleasure read...nice build up and ending...All the best Gary
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/22/2018 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. :)

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