Calm



calm
Is the
nice feeling
that wraps our soul
just like a blanket
on embankment
river top
water
still

Heidi Sands

4/28/25

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Gershon Wolf

April 29, 2025 at 7:50 PM

Precious. Simply and absolutely precious. A FAVE for me, esp. considering that this is not an easy style to perfect. Thanks, gw

Heidi Sands

April 30, 2025 at 5:51 AM

Thank you Gershon. I appreciate the Fave too :)

Victor Buhagiar

April 29, 2025 at 3:44 AM

Calm. So important in life. Lovely poem.

Heidi Sands

April 29, 2025 at 4:52 AM

Yes. Very important. Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 28, 2025 at 1:13 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Calm" write. I would love your "Calm" blanket around me. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day writing away..............

Heidi Sands

April 28, 2025 at 4:11 PM

Hi Paula. I am sending you calmness! No , this isn't for a comtest. I appreciate your kind comment . Blessings :)